I may have already commented on this. Writing for oral presentation, to me, is much different than writing for a reading audience. I love researching topics, and at some point, I just have to smack my hand and say, "Enough." One reason I departed Toastmasters after 21 years. It's actually liberating at my age to write for myself. Still, I revise. You write with substance and wit, and it's easy to send my mind conjuring what you describe. An example was the place in Florida you used to live.
I may have already commented on this. Writing for oral presentation, to me, is much different than writing for a reading audience. I love researching topics, and at some point, I just have to smack my hand and say, "Enough." One reason I departed Toastmasters after 21 years. It's actually liberating at my age to write for myself. Still, I revise. You write with substance and wit, and it's easy to send my mind conjuring what you describe. An example was the place in Florida you used to live.
I hope you keep on wrangling and writing for a long time!